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Thursday, 26 June 2008
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Sincere Apologies!
Good afternoon readers,
I know that I have been away for quite a time. But in that time I had a writer's block, and only just recently have I started writing again. I have rewritten chapter one and my history and dear reader's section. I will possibly be posting that soon. I have also changed several names as well, including my own.
Please be looking for changes soon!
May the path be always bright!
Maggie Walker
Tuesday, 28 November 2006
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The History of Daire and the Black Isles
A century before this book begins, a king ruled the Black Isles and Daire. His name was Nathan. No one knew how the king had begun his reign, or even how get got there. Some say it was by a great spirit, others say that he was from another island that was part of the Knuberian Islands. Wherever Nathan came from, he was taught by the best. His knowledge was great, his wisdom unfathomable, and his kindness was told of for years. His wife, Kathryn, was the first queen of Daire. Her story is more widely known, as she lived on Daire before she met Nathan. Kathryn was the daughter of a family known as the McCalister clan. Her beauty, good morals, and good cheer were told countless times over and over again around warm hearths. Their reign together improved Daire and the Black Isles. There was never a child who went hungry in this land, and with willing subjects to serve them and a secure feeling that had not been felt for many years. Kathryn gave birth to two sons; Arawn and Sárán. As the years passed, the two brothers found an animosity growing between them. The elder, Arawn, struggled to follow his father’s ways, and those of the Naemu, Father of All. Sárán on the other hand, opposed all his father’s teachings, and those of Naemu’s. Anger, tension, and hostility grew to bursting point between mother, father, and the two brothers. In the end, Sárán fled an unknown island in the Knuberian Islands. Nathan and Arawn had no idea where he had gone, but Arawn, with permission from his father, set out on a journey to find his brother.
The years passed, and through them were many terror-filled years when the people of the Black Isles and Daire turned their backs on the teachings of Naemu, and became corrupted people, doing what was right in their own eyes. The people left Naemu to follow the teaching of Gwydion, the god of mendacity. To stop Gwydion’s lies from seeping into the Black Isles, King Nathan put a ban on any of his subjects leaving the Isles, or for any ships to come from the Knuberian Islands, as that was were Gwydion was hidden. Because many exotic goods came from those islands, the people began to rebel as they realized Nathan’s intent. A year went by, before the rebellion swelled to the max, and in their anger, the inhabitants of the Isles turned upon their king and his household. Nathan was killed without any grace, and Kathryn was put in the dungeon. As Arawn was still searching for Sárán, he had no idea what was happening at home in the Isles. During another trip around the Knuberian Islands, Arawn came up against a storm that practically destroyed his boat, throwing him against the shores of an unknown island. As he struggled to pull himself up farther on the beach to avoid being sucked back into the sea, a young woman appeared out of nowhere to help. As Arawn was too exhausted from his ordeal with the sea, he just accepted the help without any question. Upon waking, as he had passed out, Arawn saw a beautiful figure leaning over him, watching with a concerned expression on her young face. The girl lived on the beach with her father and two siblings, her mother having died three years before. He grew to love this young woman over the course of time as she nursed him back to health. While out walking one day, he asked for her hand, and was accepted. When they returned to the young woman’s home, they found it in ruins, and the father and two siblings were gone, blood leaving a signs of a painful struggle. Arawn was able to convince the young woman to come home with him, to live on the Black Isles and to become his wife. As he was now all she had left, she agreed, though not without putting three plaques up for her family.
All this time that Arawn had been gone, the Black Isles was in an uproar. The queen was under house-arrest in her own home, and her husband’s previous adviser became to temporary ruler. The people calmed down slightly, but not for long, as this man’s weak guidance threw the country into even more disturbance. Gwydion’s aides were all among the people, causing dissensions among families, among villages, and among those in the palace as well. All this confusion was what Arawn and his young bride saw upon returning from Arawn’s ten year journey, looking for his brother. His sorrow when finding his father dead and his mother dying soon turned into anger for the stupidity of the people he once called his subjects. He overthrew the adviser, and in placing himself upon the throne, he slowly brought order back into the country. His mother, Kathryn lived for another three years, during which she saw the birth of her granddaughter May. Before she died, Kathryn appointed Liana, her son’s wife, to be the next queen.
Liana and Arawn ruled the Black Isles, obtaining the acceptance and willingness of their people. It was not long before Arawn, with the help of his soldiers, took back Achnarachae, the small town on the coast of Daire, from Gwydion’s servants. In doing so, he passed a decree giving liberty to any who wished to press on into Daire’s wildernesses that they may do so. Those who did move on, carried Arawn and Liana’s banner in front of them, declaring any land they passed over, to be under the two sovereigns’ kingdom. Five years passed while Daire and the Black Isles became very fertile lands, having many inhabitants whose bellies where full of the produce off the land. May grew into a beautiful, dark haired, fiery eyed little girl. She had her grandfather’s determinedness, her father’s kindness, and her mother’s beauty and good morals. At the beginning of her fifth year, a stranger set foot on the Black Isles’ soil. Rumors began to spread of certain powers he was to possess. The king and queen were starting to wonder when they would see this stranger, when one day he was announced into their throne room. Arawn flew to his feet upon laying eyes on that stranger. The stranger was his long lost brother, Sárán. There was a different spirit about him, almost an indifference to whether or not he cared that he had a niece, or that both his parents were dead. Arawn pretended not to notice, but the change was so recognizable, that there was no way to not see it. Though Arawn saw the change, he did nothing about it, even after Liana’s pleas to make Sárán leave. The night before a great feast Arawn was having in celebration for his brother’s return, Arawn was dragged out of bed by some unknown creature, and then thrown into a prison unseen to mortal eyes. The next morning brought chaos to Daire and the Black Isles as word spread of the missing king. The feast forgotten, the kingdom was in turmoil. A week later, Sárán was appointed ruler as the people gave Arawn up as dead. Liana, after refusing to believe that her husband was dead, refused to become Sárán’s queen. She lived in the fear of being killed after seeing Sárán murder several people of no fault. He told her that if she had born a son to his brother, that boy-child would be killed. In that, Liana took hope that he would not kill her daughter, but that hope was distilled when discovering herself expecting once again. Knowing that this child would be a boy, due to a vision, Liana took May, her daughter and fled to Daire. Her trail was unknown to all but her closest friend and adviser, Anna Tearcher. When Sárán was told of her escape, he sent his soldiers after her to bring her back. Anna, using a spell of great strength to confuse the soldiers, was able to keep her mistress safe and her hiding place a secret. When seeing that her own life was in danger, she left the Black Isles to join Liana in hiding.
Twenty years have now passed since that wretched year of terror. The kingdom is in tatters, the people rebelling as when Nathan was still king, but this time with a worthy reason. Sárán ruled with a treacherous hand, treating his subjects with contempt. Many families were separated due to some whim of Sárán’s that the people would be much more willing to submit to his rule if he separated loved ones. The soldiers of once great army of Arawn’s were now vile and deformed men who, by Sárán’s spells had become an army to fear, not to gather strength and courage from. Although, there were citizens of the Black Isles who were willing to submit to Sárán were without fear of having their very life destroyed, there were those who had loved ones within his grasp, and were without mercy on their sacrifice to starvation so that he might have the best produce of the land. Those were the ones who lived with the fear of having their names blotted from their body’s blood. These were the people whose number rose to overwhelming. Starvation was now the most prominent problem in the Black Isles. Those living on Daire had no idea of this, as they were not permitted to travel to and from the Black Isles, likewise for those living on the Black Isles.
The years and seasons went by without any change in the course of life. That is, until two families said they had had enough of Sárán’s tyranny. The two families will join an alliance with three other families. Together they will bring legend after legend into fulfillment.
Thursday, 02 November 2006
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{Chapter one ~ Completed}
The village of Kings where all mighty kings of the earth have passed unwearied through its steel gates.
The sun began to rise as the morning sky was a blend of pinks, reds, and grays. Faint rays of light shone on a lone man upon a horse, watching the village in front of him. Light glinted off his golden hair, making his face appear even brighter in the morning light. Looking closely upon his finely featured face, you would have seen the look of a fully trained warrior; one that showed no sign of any emotions. The small hill, from which he watched, gave a panoramic view of the entire village and lake next to it. The lake shimmered, catching beams of sunshine from the sky. The surface undisturbed, except for an occasional ripple as a fish passed.
“Just another village…” his words faded away into the brisk air. The day being the third of the month Cinaput, the weather was still very crisp.
The village of Greenville was just waking up, when a knock sounded upon the door of the mayor’s home. “Who would be knocking on my door at this time!” his grumpy voice could be heard through the front door. The mayor opened the door, expecting to see one of villagers, but was surprised to find a man standing there; a stranger to the village.
“Who are you?” the mayor asked, suspiciously.
“Never mind who I am. I am looking for the mayor of this village.” the man asked.
“You have found him, stranger. What do you need?”
“I have a notice for this place.”
“What type of notice?”
“A very important one.”
These types of questions continued to flow from the mayor’s mouth for several more minutes. By now the man was getting a little irritated with this mayor. Pulling himself up to his full towering height, the man said, “This notice is from the king. My orders are to inform you of its contents, nothing more.”
“Very well, I believe you.”
“I have one more request. This entire village needs to hear this as well.”
“You there! Go ring the bell!” The mayor called to a young boy in the street.
“Right away, sir!” The boy raced down the street to the alarm tower.
The man and the mayor stood on the steps of the mayor’s house, waiting for every person to assemble. Five minutes later, with much commotion, the village had gathered.
“That’s about everyone. Now continue on, if you please.”
Clearing his throat, the man held up an exquisite roll of paper. Unrolling it, he began to read.
“’Good people of Greenville. I am Lorcan, ruler of Daire. It gives me great pleasure to call you my loyal subjects. I am greatly troubled to inform you that there are traitors among you! These traitors belong to the lying man who once called himself your king; the king I saved all of you from. I am asking you now to assist me in catching all these traitors. Two hundred shekels will be rewarded to all who hand over any number of traitors. On the second day of next month, three of my officers will be arriving in your village to be of assistance to you. They will take care of all of the traitors whom you may find.
I am very pleased with my subjects. I give you all my blessings of good health and prosperity!
Signed,
Lorcan
King of Daire ~ Ruler of the Black Isles.’”
With footsteps ringing in the silence after reading the proclamation aloud, the man walked to where his horse was tied. He pulled a mallet and a crude nail from his bag. Walking back to where the quiet mayor stood, the man proceeded to put up the notice on the mayor’s door.
For a few moments, all that could be heard was the sound of that hammer.
“BANG! BANG! THUD!” as the nail struck home.
The village was quiet as the man finished hammering in the nail. Then suddenly all pandemonium broke loose.
“Praise King Lorcan!”
“Kill the traitors!”
“Find the traitors!”
“Vengeance for the King!
Shouts rang out of praise to the king, and of vengeance for him. The man just shook his head, and turned to leave. In doing so, he ran into a beautiful young woman standing at the edge of the crowd, knocking her to the ground.
“Are you all right?” The man reached down to pull her up.
“Yes, I am all right.” She brushed her skirts off.
The man looked into her eyes, but quickly turned away at the gentleness and strength in their gaze. He quickly made up the difference between him and his horse, mounting swiftly, rode away, looking back only once. A look of extreme sorrow and pain began to make its way over his face, as he rode out from the village. “Another village soon to be completely taken in by Lorcan’s lies.” was his broken whisper.
~*~*~
“Rachel! Where is that bucket of water I asked for?” a woman’s voice could be heard above the din of the Walker household.
“Coming, Mother!” a girl rushed through the eating room, carrying a big bucket in her hands.
“Watch out!” Rachel almost tripped over a little boy on the floor.
“What are you doing?”
“I’m lookin’ for the ants Mama toll me ‘bout.” the little boy said proudly.
“You are in the way. I have an idea! Why don’t you go ask Mother where else she saw the ants?”
“O-tay, Rachel.”
Fourteen year old Rachel Walker continued on to her mother’s side, lugging the bucket full of water.
“Here you are, Mother.” she said, slowly lowering the bucket to the dirt floor.
“Thank you, Rachel. Have you seen Thomas?” her mother asked.
“As a matter of fact, I have; nearly tripped over him, too!” she laughed.
“Is he still looking for ants?” her mother asked.
“Yes, he is.”
“Would you please tell Ethan I need more wood?” Mrs. Walker smiled as she watched her young daughter walk out the door with a spring in her step.
As she walked out the door, Rachel met her oldest sister. “Kiara, what was all the fuss in the village this morning about?”
“It is about some notice from Lorcan.”
“Where…LORCAN!”
“Yes, I was surprised as well.”
“I thought we would be safe here!”
“I know, I know. Don’t say anything to anyone else. Father is down in the square still. I know he will have more news when he gets back.”
The two women separated, each going their own ways; Rachel to find Ethan, Kiara to find her mother.
Later that afternoon, as the sun shone down on hard worked fields with a brilliance that surpassed nothing else, two men could be seen walking. At a path leading to a large, almost completed cabin, the men stopped.
“I’ll talk to Grace, but we really don’t have a choice.”
“Yes, I agree,
The men parted then, one walking up to the home, the other continuing his walk down the road.
“Father’s back!” the cry spread throughout the Walker’s home.
Grace walked out the door of the cabin, hastily brushing the little hairs that had escaped her bun, to meet her husband.
“I heard there was a slight commotion in the village square this morning.”
“Yes, m’dear, there was.” he sat down at the kitchen table.
“What was it about?”
“A soldier with a notice.”
“A notice?”
“Yes. A notice from Lorcan.”
“No, not here!”
“Yes, he has now begun his reign over Daire.”
“But I thought we would be safe here!”
“I know. But with Lorcan, anything is possible.”
“Where are we going to go? What are you going to do?”
“I’m not sure, but we all need to talk about it. Please call everyone.”
The Walker children came from all over the home; some from the doorway where they had already been listening, some from the yard and others from the barn. The children filed in, nineteen year old Kiara all the way down all nine of them to five and a half year old Catherine.
“Good afternoon Father.” Kiara said upon entering the room, the others following suit. Peter waited until everyone was situated before starting to talk.
“A notice was posted in the square this morning; a notice saying that Lorcan is king over this town. This means we have to leave as quickly as possible.”
“Are the Glaidet coming again?” Rachel asked fear shaking in her voice.
“I do not know. The notice says that in a week three men will come. I hardly think that would be the Glaidet.” Peter replied.
“Have you talked to Sam about this yet?” Grace asked.
“I will this evening. We walked back from the square together.”
“All right children, back to your work!” Grace shooed everyone out of the kitchen, and continued with the preparations for dinner.
Directly after the meal was over, Peter stood up from his chair, and grabbing his coat, he strode out the door. “I will be back before dawn.” he laughingly said.
As he walked over to Samuel Hawkins’ home, he mused over what the course of action should be. “Hmm, this one is certainly a teaser…” he rubbed his chin thoughtfully. When reaching the Hawkin’s home, his eyes fell upon a young man in the door of the barn.
“Joshua, is your father home?” Peter asked as the young man walked to meet him.
“Aye, Mister Walker, he’s in the kitchen with my mother.”
“Thank you, Joshua.”
Twenty year old Joshua watched Peter before going back into the barn to finish his chores.
Peter walked up to the door at the side of the house, and was about to knock, when the door was opened and another young man stood there.
“Oh hello Mister Walker! Come to see my father, I presume?”
“Yes, Nathan, I have. Joshua told me he was here…?”
“Yes sir, he’s right inside. Now if you’ll just excuse me, and I have some chores to finish.” Eighteen year old Nathan ran to the barn.
“Hello Peter, come in!” A woman’s voice called from inside.
“Good afternoon Alana, how are you?”
“I am just fine.”
“Come in, Peter, I already have those maps you were asking about earlier here.” Sam walked out of the kitchen, holding a slice of bread in one hand, and a beaker of fresh milk in the other, “I was just finishing my dinner.”
Peter and Sam, after finishing his dinner, soon began to plot out routes of escape, and how they would escape from Greenville. Knowing that this escape would be costly if it failed, they both felt the tremendous responsibility of protecting their families. The mayor of Greenville, as they had already observed, was very devoted to and would do anything to please Lorcan, even if it meant killing those dear to him.
“Let’s see. With your nine, and my seven, and then Grace, Alana, yourself, and me, that would be twenty horses, but not if we doubled the little ones with older one.”
“Yes, that sounds about right. But where would we get all those horses without causing suspicion?” Peter asked.
“True, it would be apparent we were doing something if we went out and traded for twenty horses.”
“We will have to travel on foot then, as there is no other choice. The town of Corinville is a few days’ walk away, but I believe we would be able to make it.”
“As the town of Vanity is about the same distance in traveling to the south, that would give any who follow us a choice between the two towns.”
“That it would.”
“Sam, didn’t you know someone who lives in Corinville?”
“Come to think of it, I do, or at least did. Josiah Smith is his name. I wonder how he’s doing these days.” Sam mused to himself.
“If there was a way possible to meet him in the town, we might be able to trade for horses with him.”
“Excellent, I’ll send him…”
“No, you don’t want to do that.” Peter said, “The postmaster is just as loyal as Mayor Past. That letter would never make it out without people asking questions. I suppose the best way to go would be to just find him when we reach Corinville.”
“Yes, that would be the best way.”
The maps were spread on the table as Sam and Peter pointed to and drew lines on the map the whole time discussing the route to a clearing that was about a weeks’ journey away.
“How shall we leave this time?” Peter inquired, “I mean we can’t just walk out of town with no one knowing that we are leaving.”
“I see what you mean. Hmmm, setting fire to our homes could be an option, but I’m not sure how that would sit with the wives.” Sam laughed.
“Sam, I have it! Do you recall that disease that was spreading throughout the plains last year? The Black Sore, I believe it was called, spread around by animals, especially cattle.”
“Yes, I remember, what of it?”
“Don’t you see? If we behaved as if our two households have become sick with it, no one would even come near our home.”
The two men’s eyes began to sparkle at the thought of this idea.
“As our two families spend a lot of time together, it would not cause any suspicion of why both our families have the disease.”
“Wouldn’t soot work amazingly for imitating the black sores?
“Aye, perfect!”
The two men excitedly continued to discuss the many options they had. Alana walked in as they were still talking about the diversion, and was soon brought into the plan.
“May I ask one thing?” she asked.
“Yes?”
“What happens when we try to leave? Do you both not remember what happened to the town of Calvity?”
“Yes, I remember.” Peter replied, “Sam, this town would not stop at just avoiding us. We will be burned alive if we stay here after the mayor finds out that we are sick.”
“Thank you, Alana, for bringing that to our attention.”
She left the room just then in response to a young one’s cry. Peter and Sam, now sobered up at the thoughts running through their minds.
“She’s right, you know. We could be putting our families in even greater danger by playing this out.” Sam said solemnly.
“I agree. Though, this may be our only chance of making it to Corinville without being detected.” It was decided to follow through with the act of the Black Sore, but not without much thought as to the dangers and risks involved.
“Sam, what are your thoughts on sending a note to Mayor Past, by way of either my Timothy or your Matthew about our families having the disease?”
Sam and Peter had been gathered around the maps in front of them for hours now, measuring the distance for every route possible, planning out every tiny detail necessary to escape.
“Why not both of them, with their older brothers as back up just in case?”
“That would let Grace and Alana rest easy.”
“After Mayor Past reads the note, we do not have much time to act. Our homes could be burned that very night.”
“Then we’ll wait till our wives have everything ready.”
With much deliberation, and much thought, the two men parted that evening willing to put their families through a time of trials, to get them to a better place.
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“Lord Mayor,
We are saddened to inform you that the Finley and Walker families have been smitten with the Black Sore.”
Mayor Past dropped the note from his hands, and rushed to his wash basin. “How dare they send this missive with their disease on it? They must want to get this whole town sick!”
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“Kiara, grab that blanket and wrap it around Catherine. Ethan, make sure you have that pack securely on Thomas. We don’t want him losing it.” Grace Walker dashed back and forth between her children, giving last minute instructions.
Earlier that morning, Timothy and Ethan Walker, and Nathan and Matthew Hawkins delivered a note to Mayor Past’s door. As soon as all four boys had returned, the two households erupted into a chaos of blankets being tossed to that person, or food being stuffed into everyone’s packs. Dusk was beginning to fall, when every Hawkins met at the Walker’s home. From twenty year old Joshua on down to seven year old Carina, each had a pack of their own possessions on their backs.
“Peter, a word if you please?” Sam motioned Peter aside while the wives and children mingled ready at any moment to flee.
“On way over here, I noticed a commotion in town. Upon sending Joshua to investigate, he reported that the mayor has gathered a rather large crowd and was stirring them up against us. We either flee now, or very burned alive.”
“You make sure you have all of your children, and I’ll do the same. We need to stick to the back fields, but there’s no telling if the mayor has already sent out men to prevent up from leaving.”
Twenty figures, both small and large crept out from the Walkers home. Sam and Peter in the front, Joshua, Nathan, and Ethan were in the back helping along any stragglers. They had just about reached the open area they would have cross when a shout was heard from the direction they had come from. Peter and Sam acting quickly pushed everyone across the clearing quickly and into the woods beyond. Two minutes later, a rustling sound was heard coming in their direction. Crouching down in the underbrush, the two families waited for a moment of capture. Five men walked cautiously into the clearing the families had been standing in. Grace gasped as she saw the face of one of the men reflected in the moonlight. The man was Greenville’s sheriff, greatly feared by all, except his wife. This man was known for his skill in vanquishing crime, every thief or robber feared him, yet he had one weakness; he would do anything to keep his job as sheriff.
“You, Jackson, take Red with you and search that side of the clearing.” Sheriff Hanstiem said in a gruff voice, “I’ll take this side with Taylor and Hancock. Those two families are around here somewhere, I can sense them.”
Sheriff Hanstiem walked right towards the spot there the families were hidden. Each one became tense with the anticipation of being found. But to their amazement the sheriff didn’t even make it to the edge of the clearing before he looked down and found two arrows in his legs. Falling to the ground as chaos broke loose, and being too stunned to doing anything, Sheriff Hanstiem watched as his men fled back towards the village. He struggled to his feet using a stick that had been lying near by to support himself, and then limped off after his four men, but not before swearing that he would find the
Two men with dark cloaks on stepped into the clearing, and after making sure that there were no more men about, the taller one, clearly the leader, called Peter by his name.
Not quite sure exactly what had happened, Peter cautiously arose from his hiding place, and stepped out into the moonlight. He walked towards the two men slowly, ready to flee at any false move from the two men.
“Peter Walker, I presume.” The one who had called him spoke.
“Yes, that is me.”
“You must gather your family and with the Finleys are to come with us. No, do not ask questions. Those will be answered in time. We do not have a moment to loss.”
Peter hurried back to Sam, and quickly began to gather everyone together. The two men led the group in the direction that they had mysteriously appeared from. Sam blinked as he thought he saw a shadow pass them, and looking closely made out the cloaked figure of another person.
The two men pushed the two families at a quick pace. As little ones started to stumble, the two men stopped, whispering that they could rest for a few minutes. Just then, the third figure Sam had seen, walked up to the other two, and appeared to be giving a report. The taller man listened for a few more minutes before motioning for Peter and Sam.
“I am sorry I can’t give you more time to rest, but we are being pursued. Take this flagon back to your families and let them drink freely. It will help all of you keep the pace I will set.”
Returning to their families on the ground, Sam and Peter did as the man directed. As they started up again, both families were aware of a renewed sense of strength flowing through their limbs.
Before long, the band left the forest of Cheer, and set out on the Plains of the North. Peter and Sam glanced at each other worriedly, their look saying “we can easily be spotted out here!”
As if reading their faults, the leader called a halt. “My friends, you do not seem to realize that we are protected by a shield of invisibleness. The sheriff back in the clearing could not see us, as we made ourselves only visible to you. I am Reilly O’Brian, the leader of a band of warrior nomads who wander these plains. This is Andrew Revelin and his wife, also my daughter, Katherine.”
All three threw off their hoods, revealing finely shaped features. Katherine revealed a mass of rich, dark hair. Kiara and Christy liked her immediately.
“Kate, Andrew, we’ll set up camp here. We will be protected by that dune.”
The three began setting up shelters for the families to sleep in. “Thank you.” Grace said as Kate took Catherine from Grace’s arms and laid her down on a pile of furs.
“You are very welcome. Come; let me give you some of this broth Andrew just made.” Kate led Grace towards the fire that had several pots bubbling on top of it. Grace half wondered where the pots had come from, but was too tired to even think of that. She sat down next Alana and just about fell asleep sitting there.
While Reilly was listening Sam and Peter’s story, Andrew had gotten the young boys’ interest and was in the midst of telling a thrilling story while the older children got something to eat. There were still several hours till morning, so everyone settled down to get at least that much before having to start off again.
Friday, 29 September 2006
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(Editor's note.."Dear Readers" has been rewritten. Please comment on it.)
My Dear Readers,
Twenty years ago, a king ruled the Black Isles; a rightful king. His rule was filled with kindness, civility to his subjects. However, he disappeared, and his brother took the throne. The brother’s hand soon began to stretch beyond the Black Isles, to the land across the sea; the land called Daire because of its fruitfulness.
Like many other people, my family rebelled against this new king. His hand ruled with such cruelty. The cry for a deliverer soon could be heard in whispers throughout the Black Isles, and Daire. “If only the queen had had a son…then he would save us!”
My family and another began to plan an escape, trying to flee this usurper. We were able to barter for a passage across the *Nsu Sea. Our destination was the Town of Achnarachae* which was a bustling town on the coast of Daire.
Upon arriving, we knew that this town was not for us, so in leaving, we were faced with living off the land, and just trying to survive the rough conditions in the Plains of the South. As we moved further north, we stumbled upon a hidden village; the Village of Glen Briar. Those living there were kind to us, giving us food, clothes, and shelter for the amount of time we stayed there. As we moved on, we found another town, the Town of Justice.
Shortly after we left, the *Glaidet entered Justice, reeking havoc on everything and everyone who stood in their way. By nightfall that night, where there once stood a growing and fertile town, there stood smoking ruins. Where the bustling streets once ran, there lay unmoving figures. Those who did survive were taken captive and dragged back to Achnarachae to be taken across Nsu to the Black Isles as slaves.
Two days after we left Justice, when we thought ourselves to be safe and out of harm’s way, the Glaidet caught up with us. Finding ourselves trapped in the midst, there was nothing to do but give up. The Glaidet separated into two sections; one guarding us, the other moving ahead very quickly. The leader of our group, a big hulking fellow of the name Seshut, appeared to have smelled something as he began to push us even faster. Suddenly, eight figures appeared in our midst, and a ninth one who appeared to be the leader. All nine of the warriors carried deadly looking swords, and were covered from head to toe with armor. With amazing skill and agility, the nine criss-crossed with each other, killing as they went. In five minutes, it was all over, the Glaidet were dead. Since then, we continued our travels, but have never forgotten the brave and daring rescue of those eight warriors.
May our deliverer come soon!
In Naemu’s name,
Kiara Walker
*see references
Friday, 15 September 2006
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(Editor's note: Chapter one was not complete upon first posting it. Chapter one is now complete)
My Dear Reader
Many years ago, twenty to be exact, the rule of Daire changed hands. The just king was overthrown by a brother who was thirsty for power. This brother now rules Daire with an unforgiving hand. The true king was our greatest ruler. His kindness was known all over Daire. Though he only had a daughter, there was hope that the child the queen was carrying would be a son. The queen he left behind was more beautiful then the morning sky. Her beauty was told of from the Black Isles, all the way to the Mountains of Oengus. First this brother wanted the throne, and then he wanted his brother’s wife, now he is lying to gain the people’s trust! Is there no end to his wickedness? As the new king’s lust grew, the queen was forced to flee, carrying a little one, and a girl of seven years. The queen’s small family, after fleeing the outstretched hands of her brother in-law, practically disappeared. She fled because of fear for her little one. Why? Her little one was a boy, or at least, so the rumor goes. However, if this is true, it would mean the end of the king’s cruel reign. The king knows of this rumor, I’m afraid. When it first reached his ears, after spreading quickly through the mouths of others, he became furious. Four of his men had to hold him down lest he hurt himself. Those four men were no longer seen after that.
As the years have gone by, every one of us have suffered one way or another at the king’s hands, whether it be by torture, starvation, families being separated, we have never given up hope. As it has now been nineteen years since the queen fled, and the little one would be close to twenty years old. He would be old enough to bring together an army of great strength, and conquer his uncle, taking back what is rightfully his. Because of this, the king has begun to take young men around the same age of his nephew, and has either killed them, or putting them under a strong spell. The young men are then taken back to the Desolate Plains of the South, and put to work on building his castle, never to see the brightness of day with their own eyes again.
We pray and hope that the King and his Son will return to us, and rescue us from this persecuting brother.
May our true King Bless you,
a Kiara Walker b
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The sun began to rise as the morning sky was a blend of pinks, reds, and grays. Faint rays of light shone on a lone man upon a horse, watching the village in front of him. Light glinted off his golden hair, making his face appear even brighter in the morning light. Looking closely upon his finely featured face, you would have seen the look of a fully trained warrior; one that showed no sign of any emotions. The small hill, from which he watched, gave a panoramic view of the entire village and lake next to it. The lake shimmered, catching beams of sunshine from the sky. The surface undisturbed, except for an occasional ripple as a fish passed.
“Just another village…” his words faded away into the brisk air. The day being the third of the month Cinaput, the weather was still very crisp.
The village of Greenville was just waking up, when a knock sounded upon the door of the mayor’s home. “Who would be knocking on my door at this time!” his grumpy voice could be heard through the front door. The mayor opened the door, expecting to see one of villagers, but was surprised to find a man standing there. A stranger to the village.
“Who? Who are you?” the mayor asked, suspiciously.
“Never mind who I am. I am looking for the mayor of this village.” the man asked.
“You have found him, stranger. What do you need?”
“I have a notice for this place.”
“What type of notice?”
“A very important one.”
These types of questions continued to flow from the mayor’s mouth for several more minutes. By now the man was getting a little irritated with this mayor. Pulling himself up to his full towering height, the man said, “This notice is from the king. My orders are to inform you of its contents, nothing more.”
“Very well, I believe you.”
“I have one more request. This entire village needs to hear this as well.”
“You there! Go ring the bell!” The mayor called to a young boy in the street.
“Right away, sir!” The boy raced down the street to the alarm tower.
The man and the mayor stood on the steps of the mayor’s house, waiting for every person to assemble. Five minutes later, with much commotion, the village had gathered.
“That’s about everyone. Now continue on, if you please.”
Clearing his throat, the man held up an exquisite roll of paper. Unrolling it, he began to read.
“’Good people of Greenville. I am Lorcan, ruler of Daire. It gives me great pleasure to call you my loyal subjects. I am greatly troubled to inform you that there are traitors among you! These traitors belong to the lying man who once called himself your king; the king I saved all of you from. I am asking you now to assist me in catching all these traitors. Two hundred shekels will be rewarded to all who hand over any number of traitors. On the second day of next month, three of my officers will be arriving in your village to be of assistance to you. They will take care of all of the traitors whom you may find.
I am very pleased with my subjects. I give you all my blessings of good health and prosperity!
Signed,
Lorcan
King of Daire ~ Ruler of the Black Isles.’”
With footsteps ringing in the silence after reading the proclamation aloud, the man walked to where his horse was tied. He pulled a mallet and a crude nail from his bag. Walking back to where the quiet mayor stood, the man proceeded to put up the notice on the mayor’s door.
For a few moments, all that could be heard was the sound of that hammer.
“BANG! BANG! THUD!” as the nail struck home.
The village was quiet as the man finished hammering in the nail. Then suddenly all pandemonium broke loose.
“Praise King Lorcan!”
“Kill the traitors!”
“Find the traitors!”
“Vengeance for the King!
Shouts rang out of praise to the king, and of vengeance for him. The man just shook his head, and turned to leave. In doing so, he ran into a beautiful young woman standing at the edge of the crowd, knocking her to the ground.
“Oh, I’m sorry. Are you all right?” The man reached down to pull her up.
“Yes, I am all right.” She brushed her skirts off.
The man looked into her eyes, but quickly turned away at the gentleness and strength in their gaze. He quickly made up the difference between him and his horse, mounting swiftly, rode away, looking back only once. A look of extreme sorrow and pain began to make its way over his face, as he rode out from the village. “Another village soon to be completely taken in by Lorcan’s lies.” was his broken whisper.
~*~*~
“Rachel! Where is that bucket of water I asked for?” a woman’s voice could be heard above the din of the Walker household.
“Coming, Mother!” a girl rushed through the eating room, carrying a big bucket in her hands.
“Watch out!” Rachel almost tripped over a little boy on the floor.
“What are you doing?”
“I’m lookin’ for the ants Mama toll me ‘bout.” the little boy said proudly.
“You are in the way. I have an idea! Why don’t you go ask Mother where else she saw the ants?”
“O-tay, Rachel.”
Fourteen year old Rachel Walker continued on to her mother’s side, lugging the bucket full of water.
“Here you are, Mother.” she said, slowly lowering the bucket to the dirt floor.
“Thank you, Rachel. Have you seen Thomas?” her mother asked.
“As a matter of fact, I have; nearly tripped over him, too!” she laughed.
“Is he still looking for ants?” her mother asked.
“Yes, he is.”
“Would you please tell Ethan I need more wood?” Mrs. Walker smiled as she watched her young daughter walk out the door with a spring in her step.
As she walked out the door, Rachel met her oldest sister. “Kiara, what was all the fuss in the village this morning about?”
“It is about some notice from Lorcan.”
“Where…LORCAN!”
“Yes, I was surprised as well.”
“I thought we would be safe here!”
“I know, I know. Don’t say anything to anyone else. Father is down in the square still. I know he will have more news when he gets back.”
The two women separated, each going their own ways; Rachel to find Ethan, Kiara to find her mother.
Later that afternoon, as the sun shone down on hard worked fields with a brilliance that surpassed nothing else, two men could be seen walking. At a path leading to a large, almost completed cabin, the men stopped.
“I will talk with Grace. Yes, I believe our days of fleeing this evil are not over yet.”
“Send one of your boys over when you and Grace have decided.”
“Sure, Sam.”
The men parted then, one walking up to the home, the other continuing his walk down the road.
“Father’s back!” the cry spread throughout the Walker’s home.
Grace walked out the door of the cabin, hastily brushing the little hairs that had escaped her bun, to meet her husband.
“I heard there was a slight commotion in the village square this morning.”
“Yes, m’dear, there was.” he sat down at the kitchen table.
“What was it about?”
“A notice.”
“A notice?”
“Yes. A notice from Lorcan.”
“Oh, I see. What will your plans be?”
“That is what I want to talk to you about. Please call all the children.”
The Walker children filed in, nineteen year old Kiara on down to five and a half year old Catherine. In one voice, they all said, “good afternoon, Father.” As seats were filled around the long table, Peter Walker began to talk, explaining to his family the disaster that would follow their family if they were to stay in Greenville.
“Does that mean we have to move again?” a little voice piped up.
“Yes, James, it does.”
The air around the family was still. No one said a word, as each mind was reliving the past. Catherine ran to her mother’s side, burying her head into the skirts of her mother.
“Mater, I don’t wan our hou to become fire again!” Her terrified voice brought back even more of the past.
“Father?” sixteen year old Ethan began, “What are you going to do? I mean, we can’t stay here, right? What if they…” he didn’t finish.
“No one is going to find out that we are the true king’s subjects.” Grace said firmly, “Now all of you get back to work, and leave your father and me alone for a bit.” she shooed them all out of the kitchen.
“All of them remember the fires, even the little ones. Are we going to experience that again?” Grace asked.
“I don’t want to put all of you through that again.” Peter put his head into his hands.
“Have you talked to Sam?”
“Yes, I talked to him this morning after reading the notice.”
“Is he of the same mind set as you?”
“I believe he is. Samuel does not want to put his family through the torture and hiding again.”
“Then the only thing for us to do is to flee once again?”
“Yes, it is the only thing left. One problem, though.”
“What is that?”
“Where are we going to go?”
Husband and wife, father and mother, sat in silence, contemplating the difficulties that were sure to be coming in the near future if their family stayed in the village of Greenville.
Two years ago, the Walker family and the Hawkins family fled from their homes in the town of Justice. Lorcan’s powerful men overtook them as they fled from the spreading darkness of his lies. Only with the help from eight unknown men, the families were able to escape before Lorcan was able to find out their names. After helping them to escape, the eight men disappeared, never to be seen again. Peter believes that men gave themselves in the place of his family and Sam’s family, but only Sam shared his belief. For almost a year, the two families had lived in daily fear of being discovered in the village of Greenville. Now that fear had become reality.
“Grace, Sam wants me to look over the maps with him to look for a safe route out of here.”
“Will you be going over right now? Dinner is just about ready.”
“After dinner is fine. That way we will have all afternoon to study the maps.”
Dinner time was usually a bustling affair in the Walker’s household, yet this meal was eaten in a hushed manner. Finishing his meal, Peter stood up, grabbing his vest from the back of the chair. Giving a kiss to his wife, he headed out the door. “Ethan, I want you and Patrick to come with me.”
Ethan and twelve year old Patrick quickly grabbed the rest of their dinner, stuffing it into jacket pockets.
The mile walk to the Hawkins home was a brisk one that afternoon. Turning off the road, and going up to their house, Peter, Ethan, and Patrick were met by two strongly built young men.
“Is your father home, Joshua?” Peter inquired of the taller one.
“Yes sir, Father’s in the kitchen finishing his dinner.” twenty year old Joshua Hawkins replied.
“Thank you, Joshua.”
Ethan and Pat followed their two friends into the Hawkins barn. One of their favorite sports to do was to pretend all of them had a sword. Then take turns fighting each other.
“Peter, I see you came yourself.” Samuel Hawkins rose to meet his friend.
“Yes, I did.”
“How did Grace take the news?” asked a handsome woman who stood at the hearth, stirring a black pot over the fire.
“She was surprised, but other then that, took it very well. How are you doing, Alana?”
“I am doing very well.” The woman straightened up, “do you want your maps, Sam?”
“Yes, if you would be so kind as to get them.”
The two men talked while waiting for Alana to get the maps.
“Do you remember that place I once told you about, Sam?”
“Which place? You have told me about a lot of different places.”
“The one that was a clearing in the middle of the most wondrous woods.”
“Oh yes, that place. I do remember you telling me about it. Why did you bring it up?”
Just then, Alana walked back into the room, carrying a pile of maps. “Here, Sam, this is all I could find.”
“Thank you. That is all we need.”
Peter and Sam bent over the maps together. “That clearing was around here…” Peter said half to himself, “Aha! Here it is. Now see here, Sam, wouldn’t that just be the prefect spot to start anew?”
“How far away is it?”
“Let’s see. That would be fifty miles to there, then…oh yes, it is about one hundred and twenty miles away.”
“120 miles!?”
“You do want to get away from Lorcan’s hand, don’t you?”
“Yes. But 120 miles?”
“Sam, don’t you see. This clearing is far from any town. Lorcan would never think to search out there!”
“I don’t think that my family could handle that trek.”
“Nor I for my family, but it is our only choice!”
The two men sat, their mouths stilled, each wondering what was really worth risking for their families. After a few more minutes, Sam spoke up; “The notice said Lorcan’s three men were coming in a week, right?”
“Uh, yes, I do believe that is correct.”
“Then that means we have less then a week to get out of here; quietly.”
“You are willing to leave all you have built here, Sam?” Peter looked into his friend’s eyes, seeing the determinedness in them.
“Yes, my family is not going to stay here with the fear of being discovered.”
“Then let’s now waste time, and decide a route to take!” Peter was overjoyed that his friend saw the value in what he had been trying to say.
“How many days would the trek to that clearing take?”
“If we travel somewhere around ten to fifteen miles a day, we would arrive at the clearing anywhere from eight to twelve days.”
As they continued to discuss possible routes to the clearing, Alana came into the room just in time to hear Sam mention the town of Clanville.
“Sam, don’t you have a friend there?”
“Where? In Clanville?”
“Yes. Was not his name Josiah…Josiah…Sam, do you remember his last name?”
“Ah, Josiah Smith.” he rubbed his chin thoughtfully, “we could pass through that town on our way, just to pick up supplies.”
“Sounds reasonable.”
The two men continued to discuss ideas until a very late hour. Stretching his arms, Peter stood up, a look of smug satisfaction on his face. “All we have to plan out now is to come up with a sufficient way to gather supplies without the other villagers noticing.”
“Yes, well, let’s talk to our wives. They will now the best.”
With that, Peter left to head home with Ethan and Pat in tow.
~*~*~
Grace, when asked, immediately knew how to gather enough supplies to at least last them till Clanville, if not longer. By sending Rachel, Kiara, and eleven year old Anna different days out into their garden, Grace was able to have a sufficient supply by the end of two days. Because of the three town gossips, all three women and girl had to work as if gathering for a daily meal.
Alana and nineteen year old Christy worked very much in the same way as the Walker women. Gathering when it wasn’t so noticeable, as well as sending the Hawkins and Walker boys to appointed hiding places outside of the village with hidden loads of blankets, baskets with vegetables, and a few jars of cider. The boys were told to tell anyone who asked what they were doing that “they were building a fort, and supplying it with some food.” It had worked so far, but there was always that chance of discovery.
The Hawkins and Walkers were taking such drastic precautions to hide the fact that they were trying to leave Greenville, because, the mayor, after receiving the notice, was very much in favor with their new ruler, King Lorcan. If anyone from the village were to find out that these two families’ loyalties lay with the old king, everyone would be killed!
“Ethan, hand me that last trunk there.” Kiara whispered urgently, glancing every once in a while behind her.
“Were you followed?”
“I’m not sure. I thought I saw someone when I left our yard.”
“Well, just to make sure, don’t go back the way you came.”
Ethan was out at “the fort”, packing smaller articles into larger trunks, as the departure date was quickly approaching. Kiara had been sent out to meet Ethan with a load of bread, hidden beneath a basket of flowers.
The day both families were planning on leaving was three days away, the town gossips knew something was happening at the ‘new families’ homes.
“Ethan, Mother wanted me to tell you to not come home the way you usually do.”
“Has that lady, Mistress Hanstiem, been asking questions again?”
Mistress Hanstiem is the most notorious gossip in town. The Walkers and Hawkins were avoiding her at all cost, in fact, everyone pretty much avoided her! Seeing the young boys carrying baskets full of “suspicious articles” had aroused her interest. Having followed Kiara, she now stood at the edge of the village, watching Kiara enter a grove of trees with a basket of flowers, then exit, not carrying the basket anymore. “Something is going on, and I am going to find out what!” was her whispered vow. Scuttling back into the village, she went to find her other cronies to tell them of what her old eyes saw.
~*~*~
The morning of the departure dawned crisp and clear. The air around the Walker’s and Hawkins’ homes was just throbbing of excitement. Peter and Sam wanted to leave in the early morning hours. So far, everything was going as planned. The two wagons were hurriedly taken out of hearing distance from the village. While walking the older boys were walking the horse-drawn wagons out, the mothers and older daughters were helping little ones get all bundled up. Having packed the wagons part way the night before, all that was left was to pick up the supplies hidden outside of the village. An hour before the sun had fully made its way up, two wagons began the ride to freedom.
“Mother, will we ever see our houses here again?” seven year old Carina Hawkins asked.
“I don’t know, my child.”
The families, when pulling up the hill from which the man had watched, looked back, realizing they weren’t alone. A small band of men from Greenville were pouring out of the gates.
“Father look!” Patrick cried out in fear, “we’re being followed!”
That was all it took to get the horses running. The wagons took off, quite literally flying up the hill and down the other side. Upon reaching the bottom, Peter saw a rather large group of trees. “Sam, pull into here. We might be able to hide the wagons from them.”
The wagons came to a stop, everyone piled out, hiding themselves in the underbrush, praying as hard as they could for safety.
No sooner had the wagons been emptied, when shouts of anger reached the ears of the hidden. Little ones began to shake with fear, as older ones turned pale.
“You there, take two of your men, and follow this road. The rest of you come with me.” a man’s voice rang out, sharp and clear in the morning breeze.
The man was the village sheriff, Master Hanstiem, Mistress Hanstiem’s husband. A robbery in the village, and he would find the robber in less then twenty-four hours. A man feared by his fellow man. His knowledge of tracking can outdo the best blood hound.
Peter inwardly groaned, “We don’t have a chance!”
Through the underbrush, the families’ terrified eyes watched as pursuer’s feet came closer and closer. Suddenly there came a shout of discovery back up the hill. “Look! There they go!”
Peter and Sam’s eyes met questioningly, “there they go?” Peter shrugged, “I don’t know.”
Peace soon settled back over the woods. They waited fifteen minutes, then twenty, still no sound of the pursuers. Peter and Sam motioned for everyone to be quiet, as they slowly arose to look around. After a few more breathless minutes, they didn’t find anything.
“You all can come out now. Quickly, get back into the wagons.” The wagons were quickly loaded of their inhabitants once more.
~*~*~
“Come join the chorus of the wind!”
“Join in the song of the birds.”
“Let it fill your heart full of joy!”
“Come join the chorus of the wind!”
The younger girls sang; swinging their shoes in time with the beat. They had quickly tired of riding in the bumpy wagons. After getting permission from their parents, the girls were walking behind the wagons playing little games, or singing songs.
“Listen to them, don’t they sound so happy?” Grace asked her husband.
“Aye, that they do.”
The rest of the day went without a hitch. After the scare that morning, everyone was ready for a good night’s sleep when camp was pitched. Using canvas sheets, the women made tents by tacking the sheets to the edge of the wagons. All fell asleep as soon as tired heads were laid down.







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